OMAM Preparation

Hi Y10
Right, I'm glad everyone managed to get their books back (even if this did mean one of my children wailing around the school!).
You have got feedback on what you need to do with a personalised target (though most of you need to do the same thing). There is a model on the back of your feedback sheet of what I expect you to do to draw out meaning and link to theme. Essentially, you focus in on the very small aspects of language and then move out to think about themes and writer's intentions.
The important thing is not to panic. We've spent 5 weeks analysing quotations, but many of you seemed to forget that when you're told to write an essay.
You must have:

• quotations
• analysis with interpretation
• comment and evaluation on writer's intention

If you feel like you are stuck with anything, leave a comment and it will email me. I'll be unable to respond tomorrow, but I will be able to on Sunday. 

As a recap - for your homework you should do a paragraph on Steinbeck's use of dialogue. This will be a useful paragraph in your assessment. You should also plan your essay. To do this use the model that is on the back of your feedback. If you've got this for every paragraph, not only is it excellent planning, you're on to a winner! 

Have a look at these sites for your own research. If you find a good one, leave it in the comment (don't leave your real name though please).

1. sparknotes (a great site!)
2. bitesize
3. universalteacher (dense, but useful)
4. shmoop (even the name's cool...)

Here is the lesson that we didn't do because of the computer failure. Note the analysis in the paragraphs.

Have fun,

Ms